有的学生心里倒也是知道要加细节，但是不知道怎么样具体化。那Cornnie的tips呢就是，不要去重复前文用过的单词了，要尽量把这些词化成表现形式。也就是说，要顺着前面的解释句添加细节，把抽象的信息变成具体的细节。下面Cornnie来做一个解释句+举例的示范，让大家更好得看到两者之间的联系。
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Topic Sentence: 不是每一个学生都应该学科学，因为这样会给部分学生带来负担。
Explanation: Since university students, especially those ones who are not majored in science-related fields, have already been preoccupied with their assignments (from their major courses), adding more science courses to their schedule is likely to make them more frustrated.
Example: As a freshman majored in Jewelry Design in college. I had to deal with a great number of assignments, such as my class presentation, a graphic design, and a term paper. Therefore, if our school had still forced me to take science classes like physics and biology, I would have been overwhelmed by more assignments coming with those courses, which would probably have interfered with my daily study schedule for my Jewelry Design.
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